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Good job, I would say work on a lil more interesting storyline. Maybe spice it up a little bit? And def add some more action, but overall it was very good for a first flash. I just didn't seem to get enough out of the story line. Maybe compress the main points and add more dialogue between important parts. Great job!
Author's Response:
alright! thank you! my first constructive criticism! :) ill definitely try to spice it up as you said, ive already got some plot twists and turns for the next part, i wanted this part to be longer, but the file size was already gigantic! next part will have much more action so dont worry! and keep a look out for it, thanks again
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Excellent flash! It was funny all the way through. Voice acting was supreme, it was goofy which made it great regardless of what other dip shits thought. They should check out other flashes were they try to voice act and it sux. You did a great job and I hope to see more. Keep it up Monkay Man! :D
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That is the only flash that actually brought a tear to my eye. There was so much emotion in that flash. It was very beautiful. Was it based on a true story?
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